Richey Edwards Posted August 27, 2022 Share Posted August 27, 2022 I've ended up changing it a wee bit. I felt it could do without the reference to how he died. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
welshbairn Posted August 28, 2022 Share Posted August 28, 2022 (edited) Yeah, the ending's much better. "Forever remembered and cherished" as the last line sounded a bit formal in contrast to the rest of it, like something you get at the bottom of a local newspaper announcement. It fits in fine where it is now, in my uninformed opinion obviously.. Edited August 28, 2022 by welshbairn 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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